All Dolled Up

Today during class we asked our lecturer what he taught of our website and he gave us some constructive criticism on what we should change, we decided to make these changes to ensure a good mark. One of the changes he Told us to change was to make the writing more eye catching,more interessting to read. So tonight i am goin to write out paragraphs to try and bring up the mark. We,re hoping that by the end of the week we will have the project done and dusted.